All Comments on 'Un·dream for My Dead'

Now this a really creative word play with images cascading through my head.

this is terrific! gave me cold chills. I would have given this poem an E (if I was the one who gives e's, lol.)

excellent work. the whole thing was like a chant, an oral history. just a great poem all around, love your imagination. Especially the line about the "dead dead" I could feel the pain, of them dying all aver again, being disturbed and disrespected.

This poem was mentioned in Sunday's New Poems Reviews.

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Haunting and disturbing and totally credible through the personal lens of the un mentioned genocide; it remains buried all around us. The spirits of the peoples should never die! Thank you for UN-SILENCING it!