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In red today top and bottom just for you

Mmmmm....a delicious sight, indeed!

Thank you!

So sensual, emotional, and moving. It made me envision the caring relationship between the two involved.

That hi-heel of hers in the resteraunt, was it Alice's resteraunt where

where ev'ry one gets what they want? Damn good poem. worth 2 thumbs

up from a guy w 2 bikes.

I really liked it, The part of "In the resteraunt, yeah my wife and I went to one place in town all the time, had an early New England atmosphere, she always wore patent black, as she was a business woman and they went great with the grey button-down dress with silver buttons. a black wide alligator belt and her black patent heels with bows stuffed in my shorts. her gold half-moon or half square glasses part down her nose as she read the menu, those heelz in my shorts. . . yup this poem brought back some great memories.

you love being dominated and you adore female power! YEAH!

I am certain all have memory of a certain someone in a certain restaurant on special place and time whether wearing red or any other color. Your poem made me relive such moments. elaina

Under her gaze

Loved and adored

Used and savoured

Her pet, comes alive

in his place.

You gift is devine my friend.

Oh Raven!

Thank you for writing a poem to comment!

And, it captures the mood perfectly!

This is fantastic, Paul! I love the way the stanzas are skillfully constructed, and that final stanza in particular!!! Well done.

Very Enjoyable!

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Hallo Paul4play!

Although I prefer female on female only, this was very enjoyable, it reminds me of things I've done myself many times,,,yes!

Thank-You, 5-Stars!

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The Black Queen and Gay Kat!

Under these skilful lines, lies a wishful poet full of life and vigor.

Under these touchy lines, lies a series of wonderfully crafted piece of poetry.

Under these provoking lines, lies a sinful need of the reader enjoying it.

Under these intriguing lines, lies a desperation for more of the underdone things.

Under these stimulating lines, lies a wish if the person under there was me.

Under these sensational lines, lies an eagerness that the sweet person was you.

Under these subtle yet lustful lines, lies a neediness to do everything with you under the sun.

"LOVED THIS POETRY."

keep writing. And make us moan for more.

Hugs and kisses. 😘😘💋💋

Bitsmania07:

Thank you for your poetic comments!

Yes, Being “under” elicits a unique erotic experience.

It is not for everyone, but for the right person it is exhilarating and orgasmic.