Under The Wind Above

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Thickening melancholy settled in,
had clouded days and nights before,
saturation evanesced, lightness astray,
the sky-bound dyer of two amiss

grass and leaves grayish green
like the monster's numerous eyes
that came and ate young trust,
foundation of two to be one

a fading streak led here
place of no more interest,
deject looks, speechless lips,
arms embrace two oneselves

fallen, from trees, silent tweets
we heard from above, full panoply now,
once barely clad on the blanket,
no more listening two lie here

moldy foliage on the ground
where nude feet were side by side
to steady the kissers, days ago,
today, feet of two feet away

chopped down bushy modesty,
departed hideout of lust and bliss,
those celebrated nocturnal caresses,
cut and lit, any two here hidden

rough bark echoes memories,
reverberating shattered moments
of heated bodies pressed against,
but cannot shake two frozen hearts

no route to walk the upward trails
that climbed the peaks, the crests,
crowns, pinnacles, summits and heights,
paths overgrown for two depressed

perambulated all common sights,
focus changed and distance grew,
wandering glances that caught the eye,
myopic reflections of two deflected

two who fell out of love,
with two's bond bygone
touches of two withered,
ex-love, 1+1 anymore two

drops start leaking,
swarms of remote moisture
wash the salt from our cheeks,
thunder in two's distance

silence, again, whispers nevermore,
a mute farewell, worst goodbye,
winds have come, dry leaves rustle,
carried away, gone are two

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RiverMayaRiverMayaover 3 years ago
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"Tis better to have loved and lost..."

A saying I cannot believe in and will never believe in. Losing love is unseen pain, one that remains a lifetime, dulled by the passage of time, but still present in suddrn flashes of unwanted memories.

You have described the loss of "two" so beautifully.

M8dOvGlazM8dOvGlazalmost 4 years ago

I really enjoyed all 3 poems in your trilogy. Poetry in your soul ❤️

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 4 years agoAuthor

I wrote that on a sunshine day to close the circle of this trilogy, yet unaware that also my future has 'after sunshine comes rain' in store...

ElorraButlerElorraButleralmost 4 years ago
A mute farewell, worst goodbye,

"a mute farewell, worst goodbye,"

This line. I can feel that deep sadness. My heart hurts for this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Oh, you have such a way with words...I absolutely love it.

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