All Comments on 'Unhappy'

by vixen_2006

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Venting the pain to get beyond it.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Convinced...

I no longer need you. Moving on is a better way ~ now to convince myself. Poignantly sad and loving.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Reflexions in a mirror!

If this is really how you are feeling i can 100%sypathise, I've done the looking in the mirror, and wrote about it.

I've seen the images of my past etched inside my eyelids -"I’m moving on, Well that’s what I tell myself, Maybe one day I’ll believe it." you will but for the time being its giving you your inspiration - treasure that as a positive loved the poem and at least you know why you have to move on!

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