- Erotic Poetry
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I just want to make you smile
Show you life from a different perspective
A know it may take a while
You've had years of being abused, cheated on and neglected
You've been dealing these dudes
But never a real Man
Them guys didn't know how to deal with you
Maybe they just didn't really understand
Yeah I'm the romantic type,
But can be as nasty as you need.
Work was hard alright
It's time for you to get pleased
While i get the oils ready, baby go take you a shower
Next is a massage with my hands and tongue for at least the first hour.
Yeah Its going down like me I want to make you shout.
Get loud if you want the kids are gone, it's only us in the house
Don't worry about lingerie,
I want you in all your glory
I love your perfect imperfections, each one tells a different story
Now I told you I was hungry
Did you know I had you on my menu
I can see it in you eyes you want me
But for now to be continued...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years ago1. perfect imperfections --don't use hook of popular song, be original
2. title?--here are 4-- Smile, you are on my menu, or Nasty and Sweet, Let me take you down a different road, Deal and Steal.
3. is "I'm a real man" needed?
4. lots of nice stuff here--keep at it
5. your lines are all from one side, yours, let her shine through also. For example end poem with , "I do love you, I do, don't you see"
