by DeepGreenEyes
Is mind- blowing. Simple but exactly right.
Nicely done.
Five.
I like the way you've the metaphor, a lot.
bite into me.....
This poem is 'sweet flesh
to be eaten', very nice.
What a difference the time of day makes and who's saying it with a juicier meaning
I like this poem a lot. I like the metaphor; the apple thing is cunning and unexpected. A very cool poem and nice and precise.