All Comments on 'Vacant'

Consistent use of images, problem is all a little shopworn

"Darkness comes

then, empty-handed

and searching"

what a cool image, darkness empty-handed...damn I have felt that way but never thought of it that way, THAT is what being a poet is-- showing someone what they have always looked at and never seen. That is what makes me want to read poetry, and what I so rarely find.

annaswirls

listless and airy...like an afterthought...a thought we all must ponder ...blue

only the new day can tell...

A bit abstract, but sincere and simple.

Fly