All Comments on 'Valentine'

Sadly, to attempt to answer your question about where things fit, I would need to teach a lesson in reading poetry. I retired from teaching three years ago. Perhaps, since you find my poetry so lacking in finesse, you shouldn't read it? Just a thought...

You've left words out that would have completed the image required.

You've put words in that destroyed the entire picture you attempted to make.

For example: "You are more than even I,

Despite my vivid dreams.

Where does (Know how to win.) fit in. It totally ruins the ending of the poem.