by Du Lac
You have a natural way with words that is quite appealing. Bravo to you!!
Why are so many people leaving the same comment so many times????? Can it be a ruse to icrease the number of 'comments' to get into the lists?
You have some wonderful phrases in here and it has the potential to be a truly great poem, but the lack of breaks and the punctuation at the end of every single line made it difficult for me to read it. Lazy eyes, I suppose. ;)
Still, the lovely thing about art is that it's so subjective. So, really, what do I know?
Your Poem has been mentioned on the thread "New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the read~
MET