by Sabina_Tolchovsky
I decided to see what else you have, and well
definitive desire, wants and need spoken with a strength that I like, a very feminine erotic, now the title hints at something wore wicked.....possibly infidelity or maybe forbidden love, or even sex it's self being forbidden, 5!
Filled with fire and passion thank you for the read .. mentioned in the Sunday reviews..
du lac
I liked this poem, but think you could do more with it. You set us up with the title; why is she verboten (note the spelling)? She is certainly a willing and adventurous partner, but an element of risk seems missing.
I like this girl, save me one for next weekend. I read
this because Syn. told me to. I had to look up the title
and found the effort was worth it. 'I am early Saturday
mornings', when you lick close to home you get fives.
Erotica excellence~
a poem with lots of passion
Tie me,
spank me,
slip it in slow and hot
Please,
touch me in all those dark, secret and trembling spots.
nice poem~
I really liked this poem- it's a a great piece and I totally relate to the feeling of it.