All Comments on 'VilleSonnet: Grasshopper's song'

to do this you need two killer lines

"her tranquil melody rang a heart throbber."

is not one of them

I'm impressed by the effort, but feel forcing yourself into forms is ill advised.

but then rumour has it I'm prejudiced against sonnets.

Ville-sonnet is poetry!!! And you did a mighty fine job with it too. There wasn't a thing I didn't like. Smooth, babe, smooth!

but,, you play a fine tune with words...blue

A serene description of nature's sounds. Nicely done!

for this poem and for letting me be a part of you wanting to write it. I can't think of a better compliment than being compared to something in nature that gives another a feeling of peace and tranquility. You are very kind and I am glad we understand one another. xo, Ange

I don't understand this type of structure... but the work here is stunning.. you always amaze me dear friend... love your writing..

Du~