All Comments on 'Vision Squared'

by Bill Dada

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sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
WHOA!!!!

WOW ! you have quite an

imagination!!!!!!

Kept me reading too,

I might add.

kinda sounded like my

first date, LOL..

-sGp-

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I think

I liked this mostly because I didn't know another soul could write such a breathless sentence besides myself...I can string a sentence forever it seems at time..can't seem to break it ...this was a ride I enjoyed...in a toxic world..toxic tv,,,and toxic minds...blue

sacksackover 18 years ago
Is this a poem?

It reads more like a free flowing rap! Now go and read Kerouac's Big Sur for a similar style.

logophilelogophileover 18 years ago
Loved it.

Will read again and again and find something new each time. I'm certain of it. Thank you so much for sharing this gem out of the crevice of your mind.

Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
and now a word from our sponsors.....

Talk about public access TV!!! I honestly felt as if I were sitting on my couch just flicking through stations!!! AWESOME!

~Honey

JenniferMidnightJenniferMidnightover 18 years ago
A Grownup's White Rabbit?

Just when I thought you were going to get into something too common you take what I think is a right turn, only to find out you went left. I liked it.

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