by Bill Dada
WOW ! you have quite an
imagination!!!!!!
Kept me reading too,
I might add.
kinda sounded like my
first date, LOL..
-sGp-
I liked this mostly because I didn't know another soul could write such a breathless sentence besides myself...I can string a sentence forever it seems at time..can't seem to break it ...this was a ride I enjoyed...in a toxic world..toxic tv,,,and toxic minds...blue
It reads more like a free flowing rap! Now go and read Kerouac's Big Sur for a similar style.
Will read again and again and find something new each time. I'm certain of it. Thank you so much for sharing this gem out of the crevice of your mind.
Talk about public access TV!!! I honestly felt as if I were sitting on my couch just flicking through stations!!! AWESOME!
~Honey
Just when I thought you were going to get into something too common you take what I think is a right turn, only to find out you went left. I liked it.