All Comments on 'Wadded Red Lace'

I thought I'd already commented on this one.

Five.

But otherwise fucking fantastic. Smooth moves poetguy!

you just got me wet! So little and so much. I love, love, love, love few words that ripen thought, leaving the brain to do the what and why. My brain did a twist a something soaked.

Mmmm very erotic with no wasted words

I don't know WHAT to say except I would have given it a little green E... I think it's the best I've ever read from you. Makes me want more and that is a wonderful thing for a poem to accomplish. 5 is not high enough.

~ maria

ps, mojo_cat is <i>Gooooood</i>, isn't she :)

Just enough words, just enough image, just enough suggestion to make the poem erotic without seeming to try to be so. I don't know that you need "snake" because the suggestion of snakelike is there without it, but otoh it does add interest and some additional ways to interpret the poem.

......do I have to go and read that story? No, its enough to get the atmosphere just from these brief lines. Nicely done.

Tess (Goes looking for the story any way.)

the big why; w/o comment 100 though