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LeBrozabout 17 years ago~~
Your usual excellent word play, keeping my tongue tripping over itself while trying to keep pace with your words. The only catch I see is in the worst place possible ~ the beginning. "I her..."??
wildsweetoneabout 17 years agoPoetry Forum
This poem was mentioned in the New Poems Review in the Poetry Forum. Please feel free to come along - wildsweetone
Anonymousabout 17 years agoI ENJOY'd
The sugary sweet spendour of words,
and the metaphors twisted and turned
to the delicious end..... thank you !
-sGp-
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