All Comments on 'Wait'

A very different... and moving poem. It comes across a little bit loose, you may want to consider changing the hyphens (-) to commas or rearranging the lines. Just an observation but the theme did come across fairly clear.

I mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. Welcome to Literotica and I look forward to seeing more of you in the Poetry Forum. :)

wildsweetone