All Comments on 'Waiter Notes'

If you like spicy food this poem will delight you. There's a distinctive erotic element that gets introduced near the end - quite cleverly.

The things that waiters see these days

And not all of them appear on Waiter Rant.com

this poem mentioned on the thread New Poem Reviews

suggestive and brilliantly told

I just LOVE how you began with the sandalettes coming off and ended w ith them being left behind. Good work, MM. I always enjoyed reading you

maria

as always

I come to the cafe to enjoy my lunch

and here is a meal with many flavors

I watch the folks at other tables

adding texture to taste as I savor

and I tip this waiter big