All Comments on 'waiting for absolution'

in very little. Crisp and pointed. Thanks.

The style is not one of my favorites as I tend to prefer punctuation, but the substance was wonderful. I could see the scene perfectly. Well done.

I love the shoe dripping from her tiny foot. Wonderful images here.

compact and thought provoking.

As I was reading this, I was anxious for it to have an ending that would leave me satisfied. I could just feel this poem building to a substantial ending, and it wasn't a let down.

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...3 for 3 today, as far as I'm concerned! Nice read.

it didn't take many words to write much!

i really enjoyed the feel of this. ty