All Comments on 'Waiting For You'

Lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it. It reminds me of someone special I'm waiting for too. Please write more sexy poetry like this. Thank you. :-)

Aching, yearning, deliciously drawn. This is wonderful. Thank you. LJ

very nice, Goldie. Makes a guy wish you were 'waiting for me'...very sensual. Nice imagery. More, please?

... at my core. Very well done! ~Imp

....the repetition and the verse format. If I have one quibble - and it's a tiny one - I say the last line of the 4th verse doesn't gel. Hands don't suck but neither does this poem. Well done!

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