All Comments on 'Waiting Maiden'

So many colors and smells and textures

Very rich writing.

Creates almost a tapestry with words

very nice indeed

Thank you

Beautiful, so many soft and inviting words. I can smell the flowers and incense in the air.

It is so sensual and descriptive. I really love poetry that evokes the senses so that the words take on texture and dimension as this does. :)

I wanted more, I didn'want it to end. Like a previous poster mentioned, this piece has a texture, and a richness to it. In a few brief lines I was transported to another place.