All Comments on 'Waking Me Up'

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Aunty MuseAunty Museabout 19 years ago
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Like all your poems, you need to proofread and edit them.

"kept"

"Despite of in all the"

i deducks 4 badly speiling grammer & sin tacks,

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
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Jesus for his help..

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