All Comments on 'Want'

I loved how you tied up all the emotions in the last stanza.

(Hey, I'm learning this poetry lingo LOL). Great job hon, I really enjoyed it, thanks. ;-)

...of which I think my favorite is:

"is it lonely

that even your closest friends

clutch unspoken fantasies"

I also think there is another poem waiting to grow out of your last verse.

I meant to say "next to the last verse". Personally, I didn't really need the last two lines.

the words that make the body desirable or vice versa??

To love the vessel that creates the words...is noble..should we feel guilty if it's beautiful also??

Interesting poem.

I may have to write an answer.

Thanks for getting my mind going...

I want this to be about me! lol

how does it feel

to have the total consciousness

of every man on the planet

inextricably wedged

deep between your perfect butt cheeks?

I have a certain one in mind that would need to be asked those questions. The laguage you use is direct and unashamed, which makes the overall effect even more erotic than any flowery speech a poem with this theme can often evoke.

I know her too. Good questions. Really good poem.

*no thermometer.