by pipedream_ink
This is really good. I don't want to turn into one of the punctuation borgs, but I wish it were more conventional. Still, fine imagery, language, emotion. "Day One" makes me hope that others may be coming along. Terrible subject matter, but highly relevant. Thank you.
I enjoy ballads and look forward to more of this poetic tale (~_~)
...is "very" good. I've been to places this hot before, though not on The Beach.