All Comments on 'watchclock hospital'

first six lines grabbed me

followed it through

yeh I liked the rhythm

the flow and the laughter

but the question

that was asked

sadly went unanswered

this vignette of yours with the thoughts entwined. Cleverly designed images delivered with a swagger. Thanks

..."delivered with a swagger". Just be careful not to swagger when you're one beer short.

I found a fantastic poem. I think you should go back and steal the clock.

I hope you don't pay any attention to your voting scores, DA: I have had to use a new scale. Your worst get 4's from me despite the fact they are 6's compared with most of lit! Another remarkable offering.