All Comments on 'Watching Me'

The prey watches the predator devour “every sweet release “.

Excellent carnal imagery.

Oh, what a wonderful sight to see and what a wonderful hunter. I keep reading your poem. I love the imagery. This is one of my favorite parts:

"To look into mine and see

predatory pleasure

when you release

essence of you for capture"

And the end! Ahhh so very nice.

Nicely done Mayday. Of the two poems, I much prefer this one 💜

Sex is not for predators, it is for lovers. You have to move from the hunter stage to the modern age. You remind us of the spider eating its partner after a good fucking..

The hunter and its prey, a fantastic comparison and compliments Watching You so well which is my preferred vantage point. And I echo swiftlytiltings comment

Such sensuality …love it

From the very first image to the very last.

You are a magician and words are your wand.

Another perfect spell cast.

Deliciousness personified. 💋