All Comments on 'Watching You'

by Maydaypilot

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swiftlytiltingswiftlytiltingover 2 years ago

Oh, to be watched and hunted in such a wonderful way. I love that you wrote two poems, sharing both erotically beautiful perspectives.

Paul4playPaul4playover 2 years ago

A perfect vantage point to watch, to witness, to capture, to stalk….

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's all how you look at it.

raven_rose_auraven_rose_auover 2 years ago

You painted a picture and gave it life. You wrote a scene and gave it meaning.

i want to make mention of the primal need invested ~ but my words are stuck in the back of my throat.

Waiting to be released.

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Older male. Natural beauty addict. I love. I feel the hard and soft, in most things. I know real and grace, and embrace them. I need to write, and strive to write well, to reach my reader. Flawed, flying blind, but still flying. I value feedback from ratings, public a...