All Comments on 'We Must Strive! (a villanelle)'

I was taught that there were two kinds of hands

helping hands and hand fulls, I since learned

that there is a right and a left two <grin>

There were two kinds of people too, those who

build and then the destructive, then I learned

that there was man and woman you know what I

learned? that there's more than what people tell

me! <smile> loved your poem~