All Comments on 'We Touch'

you seem to be developing a more restrained touch, saying less but saying more at the same time. the echoing of each phrase within individual stanzas leaves the residual message that lingers:

but still we touch

you are still there

i am still here

but still we touch

it's a poignant, quite lovely message

but touching who. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanks for the feed back, folks.

I mainly write about "Edeltraud", or for her edification and it is in the form of a saga. That is why I always put before my writings the general title, chapter title and song cycle title and also place and date. I try to make them readable as individual pieces, but reading them in the structured way I mean them to be read, is still unfinished work for me as the tale still develops. Probably in the future I will start a thread giving some kind of structural notes and the titles in chronological order, to make easier the reading of my saga.