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by SoftlyWhisper

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normal jeannormal jeanalmost 17 years ago
okay..

yet another lovely piece!!

is this a form as well?

I would only suggest that you break up your lines to give the reader a pause, a breath, otherwise, an excellent work, congrats :)

NJ

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