All Comments on 'Wedded to Silence'

enjoyed the read,

thanks,

~ J

mentioned on the new poems review thread.

I did enjoy this poem very much, and I especially enjoyed the way this part sounded.--

I’ll harbor the thought

of the preacher’s pause

and my own silence.

I think you might consider ending the poem with the word **dream**. Lose the last two line and the statement at the end. Just something about dragging the mortgage into it took away from the rest of the poem...just a suggestion. all in all a very nice poem :)