All Comments on 'Well, bugger me Paul!'

like I once loved you.

You always have such a turn of phrase. I hate to "Skip" any poems you submit, as I always wish to give them marks.

This is a lovely poem - full of meaning for me.

How can Mr Snail say "much" and "touch" fail as rhymes? Perhaps english is not his first language? And as for being so nit-picking as to question the use of the word "whilst"! Oh please - get back to Pedantry Land.

I look forward to Lady Clarissa's sequel - perhaps where she has enjoyed the attentions of Paul and describes the adventure in rhyming couplets

"poetry is not my area of expertise, as a matter of fact clarissa's poems are the first i've read all the way thru. this woman is amazing. if you have any doubts read her latest. if you still have doubts, check out her picture! i can only dream about buggering that amazing bum, poor me!!!"

I guess it would help if I had the picture, most of this is forced, trite

"I wish you would fuck me

I need you so much

I crave your caresses

I long for your touch"

is a terrible start, much and touch fail as rhyme - terribly forced even for a butt fuck poem

This on the other hand begins to go somewhere, with the exception of "Whilst"

"Whisper obscenities

Whilst probing my hole

Your lubricated fingers

Teasing your goal"

Really not surprised MIP likes it

My my, the Lady has lost all pretense of subtlety and manners. It has become obvious that Lady Clarissa has needs that are not being met! One cannot expect a starving person to eat by taking small bites and using linen napkins.

There are times when you can skip the lovemaking and only a hard, sweaty, down and dirty sordid fuck will do.

Well done (Lady) Clarissa!

Paul is one very lucky man... to have a woman who knows what she desires and knows how to express it so directly.

is this an homage to Paul McCartney?

is he still sexy?

the image of him suckling a nipple is a bit much for me...

but I'm more of a "fuck me John or george" person myself...

if clarissa has to tell paul to bugger that beautiful, delicious bum, he has to be a bloomin moron

if clarissa has to tell paul to bugger that beautiful, delicious bum, he has to be a bloomin moron

poetry is not my area of expertise, as a matter of fact clarissa's poems are the first i've read all the way thru. this woman is amazing. if you have any doubts read her latest. if you still have doubts, check out her picture!i can on dream about buggering that amazing bum, poor me!!!

poetry is not my area of expertise, as a matter of fact clarissa's poems are the first i've read all the way thru. this woman is amazing. if you have any doubts read her latest. if you still have doubts, check out her picture! i can only dream about buggering that amazing bum, poor me!!!

good poem (~_~) I enjoyed your write