by CornishBabe
...but I saved my comment for the last piece (began at the top). This was a bit like snapshots from a holiday. Your choice of verse to match the pictures is interesting, slightly off kilter at times which keeps the progression going. I would prefer to see free verse rather than rhyme but that's the style you've chosen for the most part and it does work.
Tess
Thanks Tristesse, I realized after reading your comment what felt familiar in many of these series. There was that cheerful air which you see when reviewing photo albums. Something fun to say, or a fun memory from that moment.
kind of interesting to think what would come to your mind, say, ayear from now when you see the same pictures.