All Comments on 'Wet Dream'

by LadyAmethyst

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SeemaNaazSeemaNaazover 3 years ago
Wow

Beautiful lines.

I swear I can taste the salt of the ocean, the salt of you, but realize it’s just tears sliding softly from my eyes to my lips.

I take a breath, roll to my side, wrap the blankets around me and lean against the pillows behind me.

Pretending you are with me I force myself back to sleep

And smiling, I begin to search for you in my next dream.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

A wonderful intimate moment washed ashore Morpheus' land, underneath the public sky, audienced by the cheering waves and witnessed by the patient dunes. It's very understandable to leave the security of the bed, and try and fall back into that adventurous world.

Thanks for sharing.

Lustylush69Lustylush69over 3 years ago
So hot

Love this poem, stirs up a lot of strong feelings

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Overwhelmed

This one is inside me...

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Long time lover of erotic fiction and poetry. Very drawn to dom/sub dynamics. A true switch, enjoy top or bottom equally and very able to change roles within a scene. Also enjoy vanilla moments within a kink experience or relationship. Everything always with consent. No honor...