Wet, Like Wool

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GoldFreya
GoldFreya
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She slept naked
that night,
so in the morning
it would feel
as though she'd been
with her lover

She felt dull,
and distant,
instead,
and the cold
surrounded her,
wet, like wool

It stuck,
heavy,
in clumps to her
back, and sloping shoulders,
pulling them down

So, she stood,
her cold, bare legs,
one just next to the other,
staring

And she could never forget,
never forget,
the color
of her lover's eyes,
or the wave
of her hair,

Or the nights
the shadows slid
from wall to wall.

GoldFreya
GoldFreya
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Bn2fBn2fabout 1 year ago

From your first comments here I looked forward to seeing if you planned on dipping your feet into the pool. Your first two submissions are solid entries and I await more.

elizalooelizalooabout 1 year ago

Lovely! Beautiful, resonating poem.

The feeling of wet wool, weighing us down - one to which we can all relate.

Welcome, please continue!

BlissMaraBlissMaraabout 1 year ago

Your poem has lovely, quiet imagery. I enjoyed it!

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