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Click hereShe slept naked
that night,
so in the morning
it would feel
as though she'd been
with her lover
She felt dull,
and distant,
instead,
and the cold
surrounded her,
wet, like wool
It stuck,
heavy,
in clumps to her
back, and sloping shoulders,
pulling them down
So, she stood,
her cold, bare legs,
one just next to the other,
staring
And she could never forget,
never forget,
the color
of her lover's eyes,
or the wave
of her hair,
Or the nights
the shadows slid
from wall to wall.
From your first comments here I looked forward to seeing if you planned on dipping your feet into the pool. Your first two submissions are solid entries and I await more.
Lovely! Beautiful, resonating poem.
The feeling of wet wool, weighing us down - one to which we can all relate.
Welcome, please continue!