All Comments on 'What Becomes of a Veil?'

Where are we going with this.......whoa, what a kicker........didn't see that one coming.

...lead to better beginnings...nice work...thanks.

can realize for sure. this piece is packed with lots on the emotive, but has power through out. the imagery superb. the ending a complete knockout punch. love endings like that.......nice write.......don

You were hinting that the husband was deceased, but your ending is even more surprising. Bravo!

Hard to write anything, your poem knocked all the air out of me. A fucking powerful poem. I liked how it conveyed so much anger with no hint of victimization (is that a word?)

Thanx, BD

Another powerfulllll write from out Curious.

Love the flow and the punch in the end.

Leaving, after so long can be hard.

All the luck of the Irish my friend ~!!

Love this poem, hits the heart with a Whooshhhh~!!!

blew me away. slavegurl

How can you see inside my soul so well?

I experienced this feeling that after fifteen years of living with a partner, the saddest thing was not that we were parting, but that we never truly knew each other in any special way. Loved this poem

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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... like a train, massively heavy... but in each moment, it is gathering strength and speed. Nicely written; understandable, and very good.

Hell your not going anywhere, you know when you've got it good ... ;- )