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BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years ago
Roses are read

This sort of takes the illusion out of Roses are red and violets are blue...

I enjoyed your poem.

Thanks

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
You got it right...

Girls love to hear beautiful words to describe their loveliness. But deep down, she will know if they are truth or lies. Neat poem.

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