All Comments on 'What is love'

by pezal78

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
what is love

dedication? (~_~) nice write thanks for the read.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Love...

Love is the ever lovely you. A beautiful poetic pearl.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Welcome to Lit with your first submission

And just a small suggestion, with that ending

It looks too 'cute' ~ keep it simple, direct

Would be better.

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