All Comments on 'When Abortions Cry'

by ramonathompson

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normal jeannormal jeanabout 16 years ago
a hard subject to write about

for this I have a 5. For the nerve to write it. I am familiar with that particular song, can hear it in my head. I think maybe some tweaking on the rhythm, but otherwise a good fit.

some of your work in the past makes me leery of your work, always, but after I read the new poems review, I decided to at least see what you had up today.

best wishes, NJ

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 16 years ago
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agree with NJ, for the same reasons

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
When young women cry

No 'Mamas just throw their babies away'. Any decision a young woman, not 'a mama', must make if she is not ready to have a baby is very difficult to say the least. And this poem is more like a march for the anti abortion at all cost propaganda - no abortion regardless of rape incest health or age. Back to the cave we go.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
We all deserve respect

While I agree With NJ and 1201 on the difficulty of the subject, I can't disagree with Anon on the disparaging nature of the poem towards others perspectives. We all live within the confines of our world: our values our beliefs, and deserve basic human respect.

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