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When I Dream

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42Below
42Below
16 Works
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42Below is a
jack hammer
making love
swinging weight
shifting motors
kinking straight lines
panel beating
fender bending
in your open mouth

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3 Comments
DampKittenDampKittenabout 2 months ago

Loving the vehicular metaphor. I have a poem where I attempt that.

melimelissamelimelissaabout 2 months ago

you make your point with gusto

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

love it but wish the last line would disappear

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