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All Comments on 'When I Dream'

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

love it but wish the last line would disappear

melimelissamelimelissa2 months ago

you make your point with gusto

DampKittenDampKitten2 months ago

Loving the vehicular metaphor. I have a poem where I attempt that.

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