All Comments on 'Whisper Song'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
beautiful...

very hot and passionate.

TarakinTarakinover 16 years ago
Great work!

I especially like the end of it. Very nice!

glynndahglynndahover 16 years ago
I liked this one!

It felt like a hot summer night.

jomarjomarover 16 years ago
I love

the words "whisper song." Very nicely done. And the last stanza - sounds a bit...mixed. I prefer my coffee hot and black. (insert smiley)

MagicaPracticaMagicaPracticaover 16 years ago
Beautiful

Love the coffee grind imagery, unique and distinctive.

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