All Comments on 'Whispered Foreplay'

Foreplay is where the seduction begins!

The teasing of first the skin and then the mind.

The gentlest touches have the greatest effect.

Whispering adds the sense of hearing to the sense of touch, as well as, adding a sense of mystery.

Perfume for the sense of smell.

Sweat, the sensing of moisture and heat.

Gentle kissing all over adds another dimension yet.

The sounds of the moaning of your lover resonating in your head.

What could be more erotic.

Yes, I love foreplay!

What could be better. It is filled with sensuality.

Very teasing, and sensuous!!

Such a tempting little tease of foreplay. Beautiful.

Also, extend the foreplay to make the sex memorable for her

Foreplay drives me nuts and reading this made me very aroused and moved.

Like a caress.

just a whisper alone can sometimes do it for me... it's a beautiful part of foreplay...

I really enjoyed this. I liked the use of descriptive s and the flow of the words. Not to mention the poem itself. Not my favorite of yours, that would be My Pet for obvious reasons, but this ranks second right behind it. To me though, while My Pet jumped out at me, this one shows your in a stronger light as a writer.

silky thighs...best line ever

Mistress. You make my imagination go into overdrive. I am aroused, my breathing has increased and I find I am thinking of you and how it will feel to please you.

This captures for me the first time with someone new. Beautifully erotic.

I LUV your style...

You captured foreplay perfectly

In so few words, you capture the moment and the intensity. Delicious....

'In-between my silky thighs

Moistness seeping

Running out and down

My wet lips'

like waves hitting the beach upon a high tide,

with such brute force

till totally satisfied

then gently recede,

leaving nothing but a faint mark on the sand.

Can be so erotic

thank you ..

I can;t wait to read more...

nicely done, another good example of less being more..

Good work, Kitten. ;) Keep making more!