All Comments on 'Whispers'

it is a good poem, but i think you show promise, and a gift, but you must spend more time editing, and rewriting. i didnt like the use of the word shadows twice, i think it weakens the poem. Also i find the use of fiddle, jarring and disrupts the flow of the poem. but please dont let my little criticism deter you from writing , and submitting. you have a talent and you should work at it.