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by ElmerGlew

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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An interesting analogy used to good effect.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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three great lines that could be put to better use in a poem with more lines.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Has potential

last review -almost as good as the poem itself...

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 16 years ago
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I guess it's just me, but I don't think it needs anymore lines.

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