All Comments on 'White Dragon'

Keeping to your brand of prose poetry. Well done description of what, in another day and age, would be described as Prince Charming or Mr. Right. There are a couple problems that slipped by and they're all in the final strophe: "...singeing my flesh." To be consistent with the way the pronouns are used in the rest of the poem, it should appear as, "...singeing her flesh." Skip a sentence and you'll find "knowning". And reread that last sentence ~ whoops. A brain hiccup ~ I get those from time to time.

with just a few tiny boo boo's but I read past them.