All Comments on 'White River'

wrything, interesting possibilities

nice

white river between

your wild writhing thighs

although cliched somewhat

small piece of advice it is better to not to submit too many poems in one day, one poem, one name will get more attention, than four. spreading the risk so to speak.

I didn't vote here.

-

is it yours or a drip of malady. TK U MLJ LV NV

"i my self can wait until.."

and he will follow your path to nosegayed ring