All Comments on 'Whore'

This worked because the lines have a frenetic pace to them.

Thank you greenmountaineer! I haven't put my writing out there for almost 15 years. Thank you for commenting :)

of the piece work perfectly. simple no apology asked none given,

the straightforward frantic pace driven by a hard rhyme and near rhyme, well written

In short , i'm your whore.... !

Killer lines Bette .

Nice job, you paint a vivid picture of the 'dripping and drenched whore' in a lovely compact poem x

were these all freebies. TK U MLJ LV NV