All Comments on 'Why we, the people will always fail'

an oration, a diatribe, but not (to my way way of thinking) a poem, so i feel unable to offer my comments on this as a poem.

A political/philosophical manifesto, a spoken-word monolouge. Typical in that genre with it's repetition and escalation. And as such, quite good.

But poem? Eh, depends on one's definiton, I guess.

an escalation

of the situation

is salvation

the black & red

don't mean Stendal

PHD in what BTW?

Mongoloid mental midgets is not PC, and cheap BTW

I gave you 100

this time

.....put me off from the start. Do you read your poems back to yourself? Aloud? I think you'd have less typos etc and also start to feel rhythm more - which is lacking in your work. Keep writing but try stepping down from the soap box first.

Tess

Show not tell. That simple.