All Comments on 'wicked'

by sweet GA peaches

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CuriouswifeCuriouswifeover 18 years ago
I really loved this one

You have a gift, girl! Keep writing.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Grr ~

I was trying to be thoughtfulllll,

then you punched me with the ending. Just loved it !!!

Sweet sexy lil ride on the wings

of passions intent. Then passion expoldes

taking all on a roller coaster ride

of merriments delight ~

Grrr ~

Yepp Muchh more,

you have a gift,

and we love it here at Lit !!!

J.DoeJ.Doeover 18 years ago
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You have some very nice lines in this poem, but they are weighted down with your cliched ones.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Well done

and getting better.

Can always feel the powerful pulse

of a true Southern Lady !

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
how else would

ya love unless it was wanton ..katie bar the doors...luvfromblue

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Damn...

...as I was reading this I kept thinking that sGAp was being very coy, but finally the real you is revealed, wickedly.

ty,bd

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Agree

with J.Doe

DuPainDuPainabout 16 years ago
Yes-Yes-Yes

Naughty and why we love it !!

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