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by seranade

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sacksackover 19 years ago
delightful imagery....

Only the last two words stick out for me. They don't seem to work with the rest of the poem. Blending with what? The snow? Are the Winter butterflies white? MMMMMMMMmmmmmmmm..

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
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Your poem is mentioned on the new poems review thread on the literotic poetry forum.

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