All Comments on 'wish and vision before sleep'

eyes closed

wakeful, almost

words take me back rewind into dreams

imagining scenes over

changing hands again and again

Which is the wish and which the vision?

I like the first stanza much more than the second.

"I have memories

able to hold in my hand

passed back and forth

left to right to other"

Good lines.

such gentle language frames this relationship. Very nice...

jim : )

I always loved that you left with a comma not a period or question mark.... comma